Tweeking This and That...

After receiving critical and good comments from our Peers, we decided that there were some aspects of our music video that needed touching up or redoing. Although most of our peers found that our music video was emotional at the end, they had also commented and said that it was a little boring seeing as they could not see the reaction of Olly's face when Charlotte comes back to him and the camera was a little bit out of focus and was a bit fuzzy to look at. So therefore, we decided that we should redo that scene again to create a better alternative to the ending. 


Another aspect we decided that we should add was that there should be a memory of Charlotte opening a present from Olly and a card on their Anniversary (through his eyes, so a POV shot) and we also thinking of adding in Charlotte looking at a photo of them on a mirror and kiss it, leaving a lipstick mark on it, showing that she misses him after all that he has done. As of at the moment the audience does not get to see much of Charlotte then they should.


We are also adding in another performance scene as in one of our comments, said that there wasn't enough performance so this time Olly will be singing down a street whilst walking and we are also adding a scene where he is singing in front of a big window while it rains outside. We also decided that it would be best to add cutaway shots that symbolise the emotions and the atmosphere of the music video and how he feels about her like: 

• Tap dripping
• Birds flying in the sky
• Sunset
• Clock face

We are filming the cutaways on Tuesday the 6th of March and then filming the rest on Friday the 9th of March!